Kia ora Clinton, this is Mrs Cameron, thanks for sharing this video explaining your thinking. Your idea to use green and red to identify the good and bad comments was very clever. There are a few things that you said that I wanted to bring up, first is personal/private information. Do you remember from Smart Footprint that personal information is stuff you can choose to share and private information is what you keep to yourself? I think you might have mixed the two up. Also, this ! is an exclamation mark and this ' is an apostrophe. Punctuation is weird aye?
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Kia ora Clinton, this is Mrs Cameron, thanks for sharing this video explaining your thinking. Your idea to use green and red to identify the good and bad comments was very clever. There are a few things that you said that I wanted to bring up, first is personal/private information. Do you remember from Smart Footprint that personal information is stuff you can choose to share and private information is what you keep to yourself? I think you might have mixed the two up. Also, this ! is an exclamation mark and this ' is an apostrophe. Punctuation is weird aye?
ReplyDeletehi its clinton
Deletethank you for tailing me about that mistake i will rember that
have a good day